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Do you like these lyrics my band wrote?

19th November 2011

Do you like these lyrics my band wrote?

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Well our guitarist wrote them and then we revised them. Anyway tell me what you think any feedback is appreciated. Thanks
Time standing still
Man giving up its will
Send me to the future
And Ill send you to the past
Look over your shoulder
And tell me what you see
Fall back into the arms
And just let it be

Look back into the past
The memories fly by so fast
They linger on into our mind
Then leave when theres nothing left to find

I have many stories
That I havent told
They are just something
That I cant seem to hold
I run away but that doesnt seem to help

Ive fallen into a dark place
I want a light to help me out
It doesnt come on by a switch
But only time can tell

Run while you still can
Because there is nothing left here
Theres nothing to be afraid of
And theres nothing left to fear
Hold on to your emotions
And timell stay in motion

If life is a parable
I often wonder
If peoples lives are comparable
We all come out as one
And in the end youll find out
That life doesnt end as it started.

There are currently 7 responses to “Do you like these lyrics my band wrote?”

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  1. 1 On November 19th, 2011, Daniel said:

    yes but you should copy wright those lyrics or someone will take them

  2. 2 On November 19th, 2011, Valeriy said:

    Yes its nice.

  3. 3 On November 19th, 2011, John said:

    What?

  4. 4 On November 19th, 2011, Lexie said:

    Those are amazing It sounds like a professional wrote it Amazing job

  5. 5 On November 19th, 2011, nihad said:

    yes they sound great

  6. 6 On November 19th, 2011, DestinySeeker said:

    That is so good. I am to wanting to ask people if my lyrics are good but I am afraid someone will take them.

  7. 7 On November 19th, 2011, said:

    nice id copy write that though but keep all the lyrics maybe the ones u didnt use can turn into somthing eles

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