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| Author: | 4043 [ Fri Jun 05, 2009 8:30 am ] |
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My friend Isabella's plot idea: Alyssa is a shy, lonely teen entering her senior year at Kendall High School. Her mother is pressuring her to follow in the family footsteps become an actress, but Alyssa finds it hard to overcome her reserved nature and is more interested in a career in music (something she is particularly talented in). Her beautiful, alcoholic, drug-using, party-scene best friend Brianna is not helpful at all, and is always trying to convince her to change her ways. Another who is not helpful is Alyssa?s long-term boyfriend Ethan, who she feels she is drifting apart from. Enter Matthew Parker, an English exchange student with great musical talent. Matthew immediately falls for Alyssa, and makes it his sole mission to help her become a musician. They become best friends, but after Alyssa rejects him at a party where they are both drunk, Matthew turns to Brianna for a relationship. Even so, Alyssa strives to revive the love she and Matthew have when she realises she is in love with him, but she soon learns that if something is worth having, then she must fight for it ... That's all she gave me. I personally think it's pretty good, but I'm probably biased since she's my friend. What do you think of it? |
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| Author: | Eden [ Fri Jun 05, 2009 8:40 am ] |
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it sounds awesome :) |
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| Author: | TakeMyHand [ Fri Jun 05, 2009 8:51 am ] |
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It's great; it has conflict, and more than a love triangle. Ask her to work on her grammar though. |
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| Author: | ducky_girl_trinh [ Fri Jun 05, 2009 9:01 am ] |
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I think it`s great! This plot sounds REALLY like REALLY intresting! If this story becomes publishes, I would definately read it for sure! =D |
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| Author: | Sarah8484 [ Fri Jun 05, 2009 9:11 am ] |
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Hm, it's actually a pretty good outline for a plot. It's cliché, but good. I like it. :) |
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| Author: | JaseyRae [ Fri Jun 05, 2009 9:22 am ] |
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It sounds good, but it still seems cliche with all the love drama. |
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| Author: | Lia9013 [ Fri Jun 05, 2009 9:32 am ] |
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OMG! this is sooo good! awesome! why is she doing this plot? i swear she can write a book from it! I'll be the second one to read it! (after you becuz ur her best friend lol) tell her to go for it! its like WOW! just go for it! hmmm.... now u guys left me wanting to read a book about this :/ |
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| Author: | troublewolf54 [ Fri Jun 05, 2009 9:42 am ] |
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it has the youth struggles plot line, which is a good one. Of course, its been written before, but that doesn't mean it can't be written again1 Tell your friend to keep going. To always keep writing! |
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