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Let’s Play Tales of Symphonia Part 29 – Electric Mayhem

23rd January 2011

Let’s Play Tales of Symphonia Part 29 – Electric Mayhem

Muppets not included…

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23rd January 2011

How would you feel if you recieved this?

alright valentines day is comin up and theres this one particular girl i really like…
we went out for a little while in summer 09 and she dumped me long story short my friends were being prcks but ive bin involved with a new social circle for a good while now. we gradually got closer again she would always laugh at my jokes and stuff and i asked her out again in the summer just gone by. she said maybe but told me no next mornin… we didnt speak again a while after that but were talking again now not quite as close as we were before but still alright…

anyway ive been writing her a poem for a few weeks now the flow isnt quite there and im not sure why but here it is so far:

i gaze at your eyes steely blue
copper hair falls softly from your head
i remember when i was happy with you
your lips with mine full and red
but you can be happy with othersanywhere
i think of youand i feel guilt
even though i doubt you care
how can i mend this tattered quilt?
yet as i sit and gaze at thee
do you ever evennotice me?

so how would you feel if i handed this to you written inside a card on valentines day?
whats the best way to give it to her? theres a valentines party goin on at cadets which i was gonna ask her to ill get back to you with how that goes…

more importantly how can i improve it? be honest cos i dont think its that good perzonally but im quite critical of myself so im not sure…
btw i really really like her and i found it hard to put all my feelings into one sonnet so i was gonna write a note in the card too to fill in any gaps…

thanks :

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